Dear Peter,
I hope this letter will find you in a good health. I’m writing in response to your letter requesting information on the course that I attended last year.
I have completed a Data Science course at the University of Wales, Which is 15 months postgraduate course for a person who has at least two years of industrial experience. It’s required intermediate knowledge of programming and database subjects, therefore, if a student wants to join this course, He has to give an entrance exam.
I firmly recommend this university, as it has an adequate reputation in the corporate world. Students can obtain an advanced level of a platform to do practical training in the class, Also, It includes a wide range of practical sessions from the industry expert. Moreover, People can access the library at any time and schedule meetings for doubt with lectures twice a month.
University offers two intakes every year. The first one usually starts in January whereas the second one starts in September. You can fill the form from the official website or send an email for enrollment in the course. However, don’t forget to attach your degree certificate and statement of marks.
All the best.
Mayank
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he course that I attended last year. I have completed a Data Science course at...
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Line 9, column 178, Rule ID: SEND_AN_EMAIL[1]
Message: Consider using 'email'.
Suggestion: email
...l the form from the official website or send an email for enrollment in the course. However, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, whereas, as to, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06435643564 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73626270931 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688118811881 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0533828044 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.25 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 4.34317383033 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25661524757 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748184800446 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696933521221 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150873237843 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794660135661 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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