Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to accommodation to stay for 30 days in San Francisco, California.
I am working with Maple Ltd, and I am going to visit the principal office in San Francisco for a work assignment. I need an adequate place to stay around E7 postcode, as it is convenient for me to travel during peak hours.
I would like to stay in a shared apartment, which is close to the tube station. I need a room with a gallery and an attached bathroom. However, it should have Wi-Fi facilities and a desk because I have to supervise other coworker's work remotely.
I will be landing at the airport on 12th March 2021 and require a flat for the same day for 30 days, but it depends on my work schedule. I would be grateful if you would furnish your terms and conditions and a rate of the accommodation.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Kind regards,
Mayank Desai
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...in San Francisco for a work assignment. I need an adequate place to stay around E...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... for me to travel during peak hours. I would like to stay in a shared apartmen...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nt, which is close to the tube station. I need a room with a gallery and an attac...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ons and a rate of the accommodation. I look forward to hearing from you. Ki...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 746.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49397590361 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.700327663 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650602409639 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4141214772 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222775828245 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764803126856 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574234299587 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120420267657 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520778785756 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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