You recently discovered that there are plan to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority.
In your letter you should tell:
-explain how you know about the plans
-describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighborhood
-suggest a possible solution to the problem.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my sheer disappointment towards your decision of building new airport in the city center.
My name is John and I live in 366 Wall Street. Yesterday, I was browsing through the internet for latest updates and then I came across this surprising news. At once, I felt stressed because we could not imagine the adverse effects of having an airport in our neighborhood.
As we live in Down Town Toronto, which is considered as a lively place and a city full of colors, this decision would be strongly disregarded by the majority of population living there. The construction of the airport in the center of city would certainly have damaging consequences on the life of people living in the vicinity.
I would highly appreciate it, if you can make some amendments in your current plan. As you are aware, the old airport is situated at the outskirts of the town, I believe that there is no better option than expanding this existing platform. Moreover, as far as financial budget is concerned, expansion of old airport is much more economical than reconstruction of the entire infrastructure.
I am hoping to hear a positive response from your end.
Yours faithfully
John Milton
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the city center. My name is John and I live in 366 Wall Street. Yesterday, I ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93779904306 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89609284543 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655502392344 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0512811467 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8181818182 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189595635306 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068606919872 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612340971628 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899399423299 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519300264725 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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