You recently moved to a different city and are looking for a place to stay Write to a real estate agent and say why did you move what location would you prefer describe the accommodation type that you need

Essay topics:

You recently moved to a different city and are looking for a place to stay. Write to a real estate agent and say:
-why did you move?
-what location would you prefer?
-describe the accommodation type that you need.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to enquire for rented accommodation in the city of Sydney for my family.

As I have been promoted to Director Projects by the organization and they have posted me to the office at Sydney, I am in dire need of a house. My wife is also working in the same company and will continue to work for the same company. Furthermore, we want to groom our careers, so this is the opportunity which we got.

Looking at our family, a two-bedroom apartment is preferable. I expect a well-equipped kitchen as my wife is an excellent chef and likes to give a try to variety of cuisines on weekends. Additionally, at least one reserved car park is essential as my company is offering me a car.

As far as transportation is concerned, we will be very happy to have nearby metro station and market since my wife can travel without hassle. Keeping my parents in mind accommodation in a quiet suburban area nearby a garden will be a great idea because we need not worry about their health. In the context, would you mind if you can search for suitable accommodation?

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
William Smith

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Average: 9.5 (2 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, well, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63942307692 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89063074724 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629807692308 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2363810177 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4166666667 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149848286132 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635429378567 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102045202488 0.0603063233224 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103276758286 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773687859631 0.0580467560999 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.