You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
-say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
-explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
-suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Michael,
How are you doing? I’m writing to you to give you a piece of advice as you asked me whether to go to study further or go to work.
If I were you, I’d find a job straight away because nowadays experience is more appreciated than the qualification, don’t you think? Going to college means that you need to pay for that, study late at night and struggle to work during the day anyway. This would mean double effort and I think it’s not worth it but this is just my opinion.
Starting working earlier would increase your chance to make your own career in the future. Extra experience will increase your confidence, understanding and give you an opportunity to move on.
I’d suggest starting working in a restaurant as a waitress, then after a while to move on to a manager position and after a couple of years start your own restaurant business. That’s how people do in these days. Anyway, let me know what you have decided and let’s keep in touch.
Best wishes,
Ricardo
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, then, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87150837989 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64736101303 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687150837989 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8663764476 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2727272727 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196975084277 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713889488367 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670196630738 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129768244299 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082552819312 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.