You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.

Dear Martha,

I hope you are doing well. I am thrilled to get your letter stating you have cleared your high school with good score, however, concerned about your dilemna over going to college or getting a job.

To the best of my knowledge, I am aware of all hardships you have faced during your high school. Although, it seems easy now but you have spent many nights awaken to understand the simple concepts. Though, it seems rosy now, but it was scary journey and exhausting one for all of us as well.

I have firm belief, however, stupid it may sound to others, that you should get a job. It will not only take away financial burden from your father, but will also open new avenues for you. In addition to this you will also gain experience in the field of your choice, hence, making it possible to jump the ladder of success faster at such a young age.

Inspite of the fact that mechanics was the toughest subject, you scored really well with very little effort. What you really need now is to focus on ensuring placement in Multinational company like Ford, Honda or Hyundai. Being part of these companies right from the start will give a big boost to your career. The earlier you make the decision, the higher are your chances of getting aligned to correct career path.

I expect to receive answer from you soon about your final decision. Looking forward for the positive response.

Best Regards
Priyanka Sharma

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...aced during your high school. Although, it seems easy now but you have spent man...
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...understand the simple concepts. Though, it seems rosy now, but it was scary jou...
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...l of us as well. I have firm belief, however, stupid it may sound to others,...
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...however, stupid it may sound to others, that you should get a job. It will not ...
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... away financial burden from your father, but will also open new avenues for you. ...
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...nce in the field of your choice, hence, making it possible to jump the ladder of...
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...ment in Multinational company like Ford, Honda or Hyundai. Being part of these c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, look, may, really, so, well, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65748031496 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2119293129 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 127.690721649 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649606299213 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2967361534 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8666666667 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276551106902 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879930990581 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734589552759 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163205927671 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672608671319 0.0580467560999 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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