Dear Jayraj,
Hope you are doing well. And, congratulations for scoring good in your final exams. I got your letter last week and my advise to you is, it will be a better option for you to look for a job instead of attending a college.
So, the reason why I am suggesting you to do a job over education is I want you to be sure for selecting your subject. As you are confused with selecting Genetics as your majors, it is better to find a job in the field of Genetics and understand the job work before choosing it as your career subject.
In order to know if this subject interests you, getting a work experience in the same field will help you to know if you want to continue with the subject. It is really important to know what will be the job opportunities, as that is what matters after completing the course.
Being in this field from past 5 years, I can suggest you to try and look for Genetic Counselor jobs. This is the best job as it helps you to learn a lot about different genetic diseases and how to manage them. Also, working time is only 7.5 hours a day. It will help you to gain proper insights in the field of genetics.
I hope the information is sufficient for now. If you need any further help you know where to contact me.
Best Regards,
Shivangi
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'advice' (a noun)?
Suggestion: advice
...ams. I got your letter last week and my advise to you is, it will be a better option f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eally important to know what will be the job opportunities, as that is what matte...
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...from past 5 years, I can suggest you to try and look for Genetic Counselor jobs. This i...
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Suggestion:
... manage them. Also, working time is only 7.5 hours a day. It will help you to gai...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the information is sufficient for now. If you need any further help you know wher...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31687242798 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44099880473 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526748971193 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0253947894 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9285714286 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236779418785 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803348118519 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559621579607 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14023857306 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374040784746 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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