You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
1. Say why she/he would not enjoy going to college.
2. explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
3. suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Tauseef,
I have received your letter the day before yesterday seeking guidance about joining a college or find a job. I have given it quite a through thought and have decided that you should opt for a job.
As you know majority of students in college are mature and have spent minimum a year working full-time in their area of interest before joining college for full-time studies. With majority of mature and experienced students it would be difficult for you to cope up and study. Doing an unpaid/ paid internship, job or a voluntary service will help you in gaining practical insights regarding your work. Additionally, it will enhance your interpersonal skills. For instance, working as a data operator will develop your skills in working on MS EXCEL worksheets or industry-relevant software. You can join an NGO if you’re interested in social and society development, teach your favorite subject to junior students, work as helper in a finance and accounting department or work in a computer shop to understand basic IT related troubleshooting.
Job will help you in realizing and identifying your inclination and true potential and will help you in choosing the right courses during your college life. Moreover, you can save some money to spend on during college years. I hope this will suffice your purpose.
Do let me know if you need my further help.
Best regards,
Farrukh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: THROUGH_THOROUGH[1]
Message: Did you mean 'thorough' (accurate, exhaustive)?
Suggestion: thorough
... or find a job. I have given it quite a through thought and have decided that you shoul...
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Line 5, column 850, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stand basic IT related troubleshooting. Job will help you in realizing and ident...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so, for instance, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09913793103 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89839522103 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616379310345 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8121082813 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190811261782 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701056066863 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367543054881 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11910255901 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446719784573 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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