In recent years many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping.Is this a positive or negative development?Give reasons from your answers and include any relevant examples from your own k

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In recent years many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or negative development?
Give reasons from your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Shopping pattern over the last few years have significantly changed as customers prefer to visit large shopping malls and shopping centers owing to this small local shops are closing down. This is a favorable development from customer’s point of view but has negative impacts on local shopkeeper and small traders.

On one hand, large size shopping centers and malls such as IMT’s and LMT’s provide complete peace of mind to its customers as it offers all sort of facilities under one roof. For instance, grocery, pharmacy, branded and unbranded clothing, shoes, electronic accessories, jewelry, toys, makeup, parlors and whatnot are available in a huge shopping mall. Additionally, it is an excellent spot for recreational activities as often people go there to enjoy good food in the Food Court area or the children’s enjoying indoor playing areas, or people watching movies in cinemas during weekend. Moreover, it offers security and parking facilities that draws even more people to visit malls and shopping centers.

On the contrary, mushroom growth of such large-scale projects is threatening and impacts negatively on local traders and shop owners. Due to the fierce competition local shops are unable to compete with large malls and shopping centers and therefore, it is becoming difficult for them to conduct a business and earn a decent living. Unemployment and inflation is on the rise due to shut-down of majority of local shops and traders observe increasingly low foot-fall of customers. Low turnout of customers and high cost of business operation is fetching losses to these local shopkeepers further pushing them towards abject poverty.

In conclusion, multi-scale malls and shopping centers are a good indicator of country’s economic and overall development and it provided employment to huge number of people but the on the other hand, it is phasing-out local shops and traders. Government can chalk out proper legislation to support local business by creating specific markets for local shops and businesses only. This is important to create economic equilibrium.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46341463415 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95078483999 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576219512195 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.8980882216 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.846153846 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268288701396 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1011821471 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077659533056 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186655597541 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10855196978 0.056905535591 191% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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