In many countries today people are choosing to have fewer children. Why is this case? What are the effects of this trend on society?
People in different parts of the world are opting to have limited number of offspring. In this essay I will expound various reasons causing this and its impact on the society.
Firstly, it is evident that resources are scarce and growing population worldwide is a huge matter of concern to people, societies and governments. For instance, scientists have predicted that by the end of 2050 world will face acute shortage of drinking water and food therefore, population control is the way forward. Another reason is the overall deteriorating quality of life such as health, security and education facilities provided by the government. Furthermore, it is easier for parents to raise two kids by giving them an excellent education and a better life instead of having more children with weak foundations and no future. Finally, overpopulation causes poverty, illiteracy, crime, health issues, hyperinflation, and starvation.
There are many positive impacts of having a small family from micro as well as macroeconomic perspective. Firstly, family planning helps in boosting socioeconomic development from a single household to the entire country. Secondly, having controlled population rate allows governments to offer its citizens with better healthcare, security, education, infrastructure, and job opportunities. For example NHS in United Kingdom offers best government-funded health facilities. Additionally, birth control helps families to raise their children in the best possible way and later they return back to the society by contributing in the country’s progress. It is also a known fact that, countries having controlled population such as Norway, Switzerland, USA, and Japan are more developed, rich, progressive and happy nations. However, one downside to this would be low number of young population in the country’s workforce, but that can be corrected by introducing effective laws and policies.
To recapitulate it, family planning plays an important role in an individual lives and greatly benefits the society by saving man-made and natural resources. It helps parents in deciding best future for their children and for themselves. Having a small family is the key to bright future for parents, society as well as governments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60932944606 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20810741447 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603498542274 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5062624529 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.176470588 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176376525044 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505535713676 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426863664312 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110410522015 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513524795453 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.