You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Sam,
I am delighted to inform you that I have been accepted at the University of Toronto MBA program. I will soon apply for the visa. My classes will start on 29th February and I will arrive in Toronto on the 20th of February 2018. Orientation will be held on 22nd Feb 2018.
Being an international student I will be legally allowed to work 20 hours part-time. As you know my family is supporting my full studies and I do not want to become an additional burden on them. Therefore, I want to work part-time to meet additional expenses such as food, accommodation, commute, clothing, and utilities. This will also help me to understand the cultural difference and working ethics of the host country. Since you have recently got your permanent residence in Canada you can help me in finding out a reasonable part-time job. For this, I would like you to read local newspapers and gather data regarding walk-in interviews for part-time vacancies. Once I am in Toronto I will personally visit them for the interviews. Moreover, you can send them my resume (attached) to potential employers with your address on it; this will ensure greater chances of landing a job.
I am just so excited to meet you soon.
Warm regards,
Farrukh.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and working ethics of the host country. Since you have recently got your permanent re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79069767442 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7781111512 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9594977494 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5714285714 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3571428571 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277894997476 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883150311516 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917263436113 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175427758015 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097709542439 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.