In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent.
Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
Nowadays, large number of countries are facing phenomenal hike in crimes and the nature of such crimes is becoming notoriously ferocious. There are number of reasons that contribute to this and can be curtailed, if carefully strategized.
First of all, poverty, illiteracy, and hunger contribute a major role in alleviating criminal instincts in people. They start with stealing and with the passage of time they become more notorious and attempt aggressive crimes such as heist, gun-point snatching, kidnapping for ransom and murder. For instance, In Pakistan alone 46% of population is illiterate or has no basic schooling. Another reason is the unfair treatment and scarcity of jobs these days. A father of five killed his children and wife and later killed himself because he was jobless for last few months. Educated individuals in Pakistan and other countries are opting to join terrorist organizations where they are being paid generously. In-return they commit heinous crimes against humanity. Saad Siddiqui a graduate from a reputed business school killed 18 people in a bus attack in Karachi.
These crimes can only be curtailed through proper legislations and concrete efforts. Governments should concentrate on providing basic necessities of life. Education can be the first line of defense inorder to eradicate petty crimes. Religious literature should be proof-read and verified before distribution. Entrepreneurship should be promoted among youth and easy loan facilities made available to vibrant youth. Rehabilitation centers to be built where prisoners are taught vocational skills to earn living after sentencing. Provision of jobs is the state responsibility so more jobs can be created to place jobless people.
In conclusion, it is important to take preëmptive measures before someone commits a crime. Provision of basic necessities such as food, shelter and clothing is the responsibility of state. To eradicate crimes education should be compulsory for every citizen.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
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Suggestion: necessities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57236842105 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03778575825 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641447368421 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1042701382 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.7 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199657961907 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550982762258 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453679142455 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129253967113 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389289977903 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.43 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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