People should be allowed to continue to work for as long as they want to, and not be forced to retire at a particular age such as 60 or 65 Do you agree or disagree?
Age cannot be a factor in determining person’s retirement age or one’s ability to work even at the age of 60 or 65. People should not be barred from undertaking work, if they are mentally and physical sound. In my opinion, I agree that, people who can effectively and efficiently perform work related tasks should be considered an asset.
Firstly, as per the labor laws worldwide 65 is the maximum age determined for an employee retirement. However, this seems impossible because in today’s economic recession and sky-rocketing inflation conditions; it is difficult to run household chores, if one stops working. For instance, in Pakistan, labor laws states 60 years as the retirement age, but people still render their services to make both ends meet. Secondly, older people are shrewd and have rich experience in their line of work have high-level of business acumen therefore, companies should retain them.
On the contrary, a fraction of people; comprises majority of youth are of the opinion that, older people are one of the reason of unemployment, and should voluntarily resign and if not should be forced to do that. They believe that, older people are holding on positions in corporate world thus leaving limited room for new graduates who are entering into the job market. This however, is not the actual reason for the unemployment rather; it is a demand and supply gap. Numbers of students graduating are far more than the number of jobs available and this is creating job deficit.
To sum it up, I believe governments should devise better policies in terms of the labor laws and taking retirement should be on employee’s discretion. As long as health allows they should carry on. Better employment prospects should also be introduced to cater new work force.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hould be on employee's discretion. As long as health allows they should carry...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1186440678 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86283980808 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8367210055 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361188079334 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11736151954 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754692034919 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212921659512 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921551862328 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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