Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Online shopping for purchasing books, tickets, groceries and clothing etcetera is becoming immensely famous among people. In my opinion, I believe such an effective use of technology is largely helpful as well as cost-effective. However, there are few downsides to it such as identity theft, cyber security and product quality related issues.
Online shopping worldwide is becoming more and more acceptable and people are buying online to save time, energy, and money. Online shopping offers several benefits firstly, by saving important time as it does not need a shopper to physically visit a market or a shopping mall and a person can order online from plethora of online options available. Secondly, it saves energy from travelling to one mall to another shop and back and forth also, it saves hassle of locating a suitable parking place for one’s vehicle. Thirdly, majority of brands offer exclusive online discounts or sales coupons that are not available at their physical stores. For instance, when Gul Ahmed Ideas a large apparel manufacturer, introduced its online stores with 40% flat discounts on online shopping, their inventory sold off within few hours. Moreover, Shopping is not only limited to household items or clothing but people are massively shopping for food online. For instance, popular food apps like Food Panda and EatOye, are estimated to have 10 million user alone in Pakistan.
On the contrary, there are some drawbacks of excessive online shopping. It has been reported previously that, few people have been scammed online as they paid for something and received something. Another example is, identity theft where a person’s credit card or debit card credentials have been stolen by hacker’s leaving a person deprived of his/her hard-earned money. But these issues can be overcome as with the employment of advanced online cyber security tools and encryption services.
In conclusion, I believe advantages of shopping online are far greater than the disadvantages. Security related issues can be solved but benefits such as peace of mind, cost saving, and energy are all what a person living in 21st century needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ar food apps like Food Panda and EatOye, are estimated to have 10 million user al...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33527696793 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72728331344 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618075801749 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2642590158 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.375 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117455992689 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409561257626 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041563956767 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665895009994 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353538892391 0.056905535591 62% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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