Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:•Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.•Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.•Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
• Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
• Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

Dear Mr. Nizami,

I am writing you regarding two weeks off from work starting next Monday. As you are aware that I am perusing specialized certifications on e-Commerce and SEO from Chartered Institute of Marketing. I have put lots of efforts into this particular area to hone my skills set and my exams are nearing. Therefore, it is important for me to show impeccable performance in my exams.

Since I don’t have any pending work but, I have already spoken to my colleague Mr. Manjoo and he has assured me to take care of my clients and urgent inquiries. However, I will be available on emails at all times. This is obvious that, extra work will be piled up but upon my return I will make sure to spend extra hours at work to compensate any pending work.

I hope you also understand the importance of this qualification as our company is moving into digital landscape for online business. In this scenario person with the right credentials would be extremely useful while negotiating with digital agencies.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Farrukh Kiani

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 367, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89361702128 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79127123564 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68085106383 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6924988794 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6363636364 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169552864665 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619675746234 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399598691458 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801424529192 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225569313882 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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