Some people believe it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care for them. Others think that there are better ways to show affection to them. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
Few people believe that giving gifts and presents to family and friends to let them know how valuable are they, is very important. However, some people hold different view and think that there are plenty of different and more reasonable ways to portray endearment to them. In my opinion I think strong relationships are based on trust, integrity and commitment and less dependent on materialism.
On one hand, these days’ people have become more materialistic in nature, and true aura of relationship is lost. People feel more valuable if they receive presents or a valuable item from someone otherwise they feel humiliated and detached. For instance, If someone is visiting his or her home country from overseas, he is expected to bring precious gifts from friends and family otherwise he/she would be under huge introspection. True value of relationship is in dungeons and ostentation has replaced genuine care, love and affection.
On the contrary, there are few people who realize the accurate value of a relationship. This breed of is difficult to find but they have different rationale of weighing spirit of relationship. They believe, it is more important to take time-out and sit with family or a friend, or physically help someone in finding a job, a new house, or nursing ailing parents or relieving someone out of miseries. They consider concrete physical efforts as an essence in nurturing a long-lasting health relationship unlike precious gifts that fade away.
In my opinion, relationships are difficult to build and easy to break therefore, they should be built on solid grounds consists of true moral values.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19622641509 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91162338392 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0664314508 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184209736291 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658142742588 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771913945793 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113962349911 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112697071222 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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