In recent years , many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or negative development ?
Customers these days mostly going to shopping malls for their weekly shopping rather than small nearby shops. Many people say that it is causing the small shops getting closed. I disagree this and instead it is a positive development which I will discuss below.
To begin with, most of the people in cities have their busy work life over the weekdays. Due to this, they do most of their shopping at bulk in the weekends or month ends. As they buy in bulk, large shopping malls offers discounted prices on their shopping cart and showcases only the certified products in quality. Hence ,customers will go to shopping malls to buy and save their valuable time and money.
In addition to that, shopping malls have zones of entertainment, food and games under single roof. So, most of the times customers can have a fun filled weekend activity along with their shopping at the same time. Also, shopping malls can bring multiple vendors under single umbrella, so that customer can have option to choose variety of products. Moreover, malls promote the organic food products thereby bringing the awareness on healthy foods.
Most of the times, managing and collecting taxes in small shops is very difficult, but it is an organized process in the malls. At the same time, malls are providing more job opportunities compared to small shops. Workers in small shops is paid very less and unstable working culture with no growth prospects leading to the unemployment. But workers in malls has opportunity to grow and generating employment is an additional positive aspect.
In conclusion, customers can save their time and money by shopping in the malls. At the same time, malls also allowing the small vendors to partner with them in B2B fashion and increasing the employment rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03355704698 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50144771379 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563758389262 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.3734304549 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.2352941176 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358252873749 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124422882895 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564631233385 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213239483524 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719250591953 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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