Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.What is your opinion about this?

Essay topics:

Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.What is your opinion about this?

To be healthy and speed up the routine activities, according to some people, house and office bay should be clean and well organized. In my opinion, I agree that keeping our house and workplace neatly makes us healthy and looking professional.

A good reason to keep our home neat and tidy is that it can avoid health issues. In other words, unwashed clothes and dishes are the major areas of mosquito’s larva accumulation and hence there is a higher risk of being affected by mosquito contaminated diseases like fever. We should be particularly clean if we have children in the home to keep them away from frequent health problems like cough and cold.

Another point to consider is that arranging daily used utensils and things in place will speed up our daily activities. For instance, while preparing coffee if the material used for it is kept in an organized manner our work will be easier and finishes fast. These kinds of simple activity optimization can save time for the working people and they can spend that for increasing knowledge.

Finally, organizing the workplace items neatly will reflect our behavior and professionalism. These will increase the quality of work and experiences a positive vibe to the colleagues. It shows the management skills of a professional and people like to interact with them more. The facility management team in the major company’s advice the employees to keep the workplace clean so that they will be well protected from electrical shocks and fires.

In conclusion, keeping the work area and house neatly in an organized way not only controls the health issues but also saves time and shows professionalism.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 282, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'activities'' or 'activity's'?
Suggestion: activities'; activity's
...nd finishes fast. These kinds of simple activities optimization can save time for the work...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, look, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10507246377 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87222419262 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5952236673 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.384615385 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0865413618775 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337594506906 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268332182238 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0477622510338 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206859687523 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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