You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Dear John,
I hope you are doing well. I got your letter with regards to your dilemma of choosing between college and job. If I were you, I would prefer you to get a job and gain practical experience than joining an undergraduate school.
Firstly, I have always known you to be passionate about photography, and you are obviously talented, Even after college, you wouldn't enjoy a desk job, and university classes will end up teaching most of the skills which you can simply learn on the job. Also, a college fee will get extremely expensive and paying back the loan is another concern.
Secondly, getting a job will not only make you financially sound compared to your peers but also transform you into a self-supporting adult. Additionally, you can learn the photography skill set under a good mentor and someday open your own studio. Wasn't that you always dreamt about?
Thirdly, I am sure with your portfolio and your charm, you will be able to get work easily. You can get started off as an assistant or an intern under a local photographer and work your way up. Give it serious thought before making any decision.
Good luck with everything and let know if I can be of any more help.
Best Wishes,
Luke
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ously talented, Even after college, you wouldnt enjoy a desk job, and university classe...
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Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Wasn't
...entor and someday open your own studio. Wasnt that you always dreamt about? Thirdl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71162790698 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59694041388 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66511627907 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1518272757 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9230769231 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292657925097 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102026793576 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755363290362 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166957810075 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097700084484 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.