Your local hospital has advertised for people to help to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.
Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter
Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital
Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do
Give details of when you would be available for this work.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Luke Hathaway and I'm a local resident of Boulder living two blocks from your hospital. I am writing in regards to the internship advertisement at your hospital and would like to offer my services.
The hospital is doing great work serving the community and I would like to do the same. In addition to this, it will help me gain some quality internship experience and hoping to be a great learning experience.
As a final year computer science student, I believe my knowledge in this field will be a great asset to improve current IT system at the hospital, It will not only save processing time for patients and his or her family members but also your staff. Furthermore, my latest cybersecurity project would be a great application to upgrade database security and to prevent hacking. I am more than happy to discuss my ideas in person and how we can implement them.
Since I am a student, I am mostly available on weekend between 8 am and 2 pm. I also have some free time on Monday and Wednesday between 6pm and 8pm starting next Friday.
I look forward to hearing a positive response from you.
Yours faithfully,
Luke Hathaway.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... Madam, My name is Luke Hathaway and Im a local resident of Boulder living two ...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...blocks from your hospital. I am writing in regards to the internship advertisement at your ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68269230769 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7150822451 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649038461538 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0220599654 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5454545455 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291294271446 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994599785361 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1049706787 0.0603063233224 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133700760374 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954969141236 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.