you recently received a letter from your friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. you think he/she should get a job.
write a letter to this friend. in your letter:\say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
expalin why getting a job is a good idea
suggest types of job that would be suitable for him /her.
Dear Sam
It was great reading from you after such a long time. I am glad that you have asked for some advice on your future course of action.
time flies quickly indeed. It doesn't seem a long ago when we were in the primary shool and now we have finished high school already. I remember you once said that you were worried about how your family would manage to pay the tuition of your younger brother, who is in grade 11 in a much expensive school, after your dad took a retirement last year. I think this can make you stressful even more if you decide to go to the college where you will be expected to pay more than your school tuition. Enrolling for a course but not being able to concentrate on your studies can really make you feel depressed and so you should rather think about taking a gap year. Meanwhile doing a job for a year you can collect enough money to support yor brother and pay your college fees by the time your brother is out of the school. He can also do the same later - break a year or two and then go to a college. Many students do this because carrying on studies ever so long make them feel bored and monotonous. also, in your case this will ideally give you a much-needed opportunity to meet family commitments.
Jobs in the hospitality sector are quite popular these days. I know a HR manager of a hotel in Pokhara, if you wish I can recommend you for a role in the reception. I think your English skills will give you an edge working in this international hotel where great number of foreigners visit each year.
Let me know if you like my suggestion.
Take care.
Yours,
Ram
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Time
...ice on your future course of action. time flies quickly indeed. It doesnt seem a ...
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Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ction. time flies quickly indeed. It doesnt seem a long ago when we were in the pri...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...d rather think about taking a gap year. Meanwhile doing a job for a year you can collect ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...ng make them feel bored and monotonous. also, in your case this will ideally give yo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l hotel where great number of foreigners visit each year. Let me know if you l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 937.175257732 141% => OK
No of words: 304.0 206.0 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34539473684 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29793733386 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 127.690721649 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601973684211 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 290.88556701 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5571341567 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0666666667 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265117818155 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787439987818 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608069939438 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146804237127 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646488325614 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.