You recently spent the night at an expensive hotel. There was a problem with your room, but the hotel staff was unable to do anything about it. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter
-describe the problem.
-explain what happened when you asked the hotel staff for help.
-say what you would like the manager to do.
Respected Sir,
I have been a regular visitor at your renowned hotel and always prefer to stay here during my every visit to Delhi. The wonderful ambience of the hotel along with the courteous staff has always fascinated me. However, my last visit was a sheer disappointment.
Last Saturday I visited Delhi for one day for my business meeting and stayed at your hotel. After the whole tiring day when I came to relax in my room, I noticed that the air-conditioner was not working. Moreover, the ceiling fan was also non-functional, it was the hot summer night with a recorded temperature of 48 degrees and it was extremely unbearable for me to stay in the non-airy room.
Therefore, I immediately complained about the situation to the available staff and requested them to change my room. They simply denied my request and sent one person to repair the air-conditioner but he was not able to fix it. What is more, I had to board my return flight early in the morning and no sleep for the whole night made me restless.
Considering the severity of the problem, I request you to take some measures to tackle such kind of issues. Primarily, the hotel employees should be instructed to resolve the issues of visitors on time. Next, the proper maintenance of the infrastructure should be done for its proper functioning, in order to provide a pleasant stay.
Looking forward to immediate actions.
Yours faithfully,
Prabh
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, moreover, so, therefore, kind of, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94262295082 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89111676826 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627049180328 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6508277396 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1428571429 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243405957055 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749118901346 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379664377165 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106446618779 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654176529033 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.