You have recently used a moving company to move your household items to a new place and they have been damaged in transfer. Write a Letter to the company’s manager and say:
– When and where did it take place?
– What is your complaint?
– Suggest a reasonable solution.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding your service that I availed for shifting my household goods from Delhi to Gurgaon last Sunday.
I would like to inform you that a glass-dinner set of borosil was damaged while moving household items from my previous house to the new one. Although I instructed the workers to package this item with more precaution, they did not use proper packaging material and moreover, did not handle it with care. As a result, all the plates and bowls of the dinner-set got broken.
According to the policy of the company, I am liable to receive a refund of the items damaged while transit. Therefore, I urge you to refund the money involved in the damage. Also, I have attached the pictures of broken items for your reference.
I hope you understand my situation and review my complaint immediately.
Please let me know if I need to provide any additional information.
I look forward to hearing your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhjot
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09302325581 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83264859328 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668604651163 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9838275559 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6363636364 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215614567514 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690896110371 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476175655187 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792199504507 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473144814468 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.