Nowadays many people choose READY-MADE FOOD and REFUSE to COOK AT HOME.
Why do you think it happens?
What are the ADVANTAGES and DISADVANTAGES of such a choice?
Owing to the surge in modernization, the lives of people are becoming more sedentary. People hardly get time to complete the necessary chores of the day and cooking is one of them. Therefore, most of the people these days prefer ready-made food. Although this trend saves time, it is also harmful to physical health.
To embark on, of all the reasons responsible for the increased consumption of fast food the crucial one is the shortage of time. This is because, in this modern era, it has become quintessential for every individual to work extremely harder to fulfil the basic necessities, as a result, they work in multiple shifts and jobs, which, in turn, leaves no time for preparing their own meals. For instance, according to the food department of India, 60% of the youth in the metropolitan cities consume ready-made food, due to the busy lifestyle.
Undoubtedly, this burgeoning trend has various merits. The most significant is the saving of precious time and effort. In other words, homemade cooking includes numerous tasks such as chopping, cutting, frying and doughing which are time-consuming and require immense efforts. For example, it has been proved that three-meal cooking involves approximately five hours of a day, which is next to impossible for a working employee to afford. Conversely, if cuisines ordered online, it would save time and energy of individuals.
Nevertheless, the over-consumption of ready-made food is egregious for the health and body. The reason for this is the oil and other ingredients used for the preparation of these cuisines do not contain a nutritive value, thereby, can cause various diseases such as obesity, high blood pressure, and food poisoning. To illustrate, in the recent report of the Health Organization of India, hundred cases of youth suffering from food-poisoning has been registered in the government hospitals in the last one year in Gurgaon, this clearly signifies the effect of contaminated junk food.
In conclusion, the busy lifestyle is the main factor for the increased consumption of ready-made food, despite saving time and energy, this trend can cause unhealthiness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... to work extremely harder to fulfil the basic necessities, as a result, they work in multiple shi...
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Line 13, column 390, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...rt of the Health Organization of India, hundred cases of youth suffering from food-pois...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29360465116 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01646710966 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3413645169 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.8125 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13281190178 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510843469946 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049802525565 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08407686816 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312843979911 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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