You have recently used a moving company to move your household items to a new place and they have been damaged in transfer. Write a letter to the company’s manager and say
– When and where did it take place?
– What is your complaint?
– Suggest a reasonable solution.
Dear Mr. Smith,
My name is Behanz Yousefi and I am writing to you regarding the raised issue with your services. Last month, I placed a moving order with your company to transfer my stuff from Tehran to Shiraz.
If you recall, I was really worried about that duo to the long distance some of my furniture may get damaged. You assured me that everything is going to be alright. However, when I get to my new house, I found out that two legs of my favorite couch were completely broken. Besides, my desk has a huge dent on its right side! Furthermore, the mirror of my closet is shattered.
I am truly disappointed by your service. I think you should send someone to assess the damages so that we could negotiate a price to compensate for the damages done. I hope we can reach an agreement very soon since I need to replace some of the furniture and I need money for that.
faithfully yours
Behnaz Yousefi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Smith, My name is Behanz Yousefi and I am writi...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ransfer my stuff from Tehran to Shiraz. If you recall, I was really worried abou...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ice to compensate for the damages done. I hope we can reach an agreement very soo...
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Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ement very soon since I need to replace some of the furniture and I need money for that. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Faithfully
...niture and I need money for that. faithfully yours Behnaz Yousefi
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d money for that. faithfully yours Behnaz Yousefi
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, may, really, regarding, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4880952381 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48190018227 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9062689765 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156406428396 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619111117753 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063030482737 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104089878779 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785165274559 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.