You recently traveled on the local bus service in your town. You think the driver drove badly and was rude to the passengers. Write a letter to the manager of the local bus service. In your letter
introduce yourself and say when the incident happened
describe what you saw and heard
say what you would like the bus company to do about it
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you to complain about the performance of one of your bus drivers. I am a student at Shiraz University and have just moved in to Shiraz since the beginning of the fall. I had taken a bus from university to the dormitory on 10th of August when I witnessed some disturbing behavior from Mr. Jalili; I checked his identification tag since I wanted to report him and did not want you to mistake him with someone else.
Firstly, he was extremely impolite as he swore and shouted at other drivers on the road all the way from my source to the destination. Secondly, he did not pay enough attention to the road and pulled the break twice suddenly to prevent crashing into other vehicles. There was an elderly on the bus who lost his balance and fell to the ground after one of the breaks. When the driver was confronted by other passengers about his careless driving, he started insulting the complainers and threatening them that he would make them get off the bus if they continued protesting.
I would like you to impose a fine for Mr. Jalili and organize some behavioral classes for your employees to improve their moral and social values. In addition, it would be beneficial to closely monitor the drivers who break the law and you receive complains about them and fire those who keep repeating behaving inappropriately.
I hope you reprimand the guilty driver and take precautionary measures to prevent similar incidents.
Yours Faithfully,
Behnaz Yousefi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...Shiraz since the beginning of the fall. I had taken a bus from university to the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 260.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74798204606 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607692307692 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0164513337 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.636363636 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181957845729 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696348109192 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049539451938 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982074600668 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219027196986 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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