Your neighbors have a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter:
– describe the problem with the dog
– explain why it is important for you to sleep
– outline what your neighbors could do about the situation.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope everything is well. I am writing to you regarding the problem that your dog has caused me and would like to ask you to think of a solution.
First of all, I like to describe the dilemma that your pet has put me through. Since your dog is extremely pampered, it does not appreciate being left alone and makes a lot of noise at night when you are at the hospital. The walls are too thin, and as your immediate neighbor I can hear your dog’s wailing loud and clear.
I am a light sleeper, and even the slightest noise wakes me up. Therefore, it is not a surprise that I cannot get a decent amount of sleep whenever you leave your dog behind. In contrast to you who work night shifts, getting up early is essential to me if I want to beat the traffic jam and get to work on time.
Since it seems that you pet is awfully lonely, I recommend you to buy another dog to entertain him while you are away or at least put him to sleep before going out. Moreover, I have heard of a special program for pets which trains them to be quiet and play on their own when left alone. It might be a good idea to give it a try.
Kind regards,
Behnaz Yousefi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Smith, I hope everything is well. I am writing ...
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Line 15, column 330, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... might be a good idea to give it a try. Kind regards, Behnaz Yousefi
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Line 19, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a to give it a try. Kind regards, Behnaz Yousefi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, at least, in contrast, first of all, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.17391304348 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21807321143 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7768543042 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 4.34317383033 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365614977285 0.216113520407 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113520247414 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110596041124 0.0603063233224 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216762960361 0.12726935374 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926597112582 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.91 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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