Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that scientific research must be conducted and monitored by the official authorities such as the government. Although there are several merits to this notion, I personally am of the belief that knowledge has no limits and nobody should be banned from exploring various fields of study.
Firstly, governments always like to pursue their ambitions and are more likely to invest money in subjects that can bring them closer to achieving their goals. For example, in middle east, all countries are competing to gain more power. In recent years, we witnessed that a great deal of money was spent on nuclear programs in Iran so that the country could assert its place in the region. This thirst for power put an unprecedented strain on the country's economy and in the meanwhile it led to no beneficial outcome. This example shows how governments can have ulterior motives when it comes to allocating resources to scientific projects and thus must be separated from the process.
Secondly, researchers have free spirits and typically do not appreciate being bossed around or told how to proceed with their work. Scholars often take different approaches to tackle a presented challenge that at the time might seem unreasonable or even stupid. However, the greatest inventions of our era such as Internet are the results of taking those adventurous risks. These decisions changed our world for the better and continue to do so. Hence, science must never be restricted or governed by the government or any kind of authority since it prevents individuals' creativity and as a result deprives human beings from reaching their full potential.
In conclusion, scientific research should not be regulated by the government if we want to value them for the sake of knowledge and not power. In addition, being controlled by government is like putting a leash on innovation and restrict the limitless potential of science.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12302839117 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76275866386 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640378548896 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3383788594 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189314235685 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615295002458 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594480487768 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127952931346 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617575188705 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.