Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
scientific research across the world is carried out and controlled sometimes by governments, sometimes by private corporation. while there are some arguments in favor of scientific probe by private sector, I agree with the view that scientific research should be fund and controlled by state.
A good reason that government is better to take control of scientific research is that despite of private companies' demand to undertake scientific research, it has two serious dangers in this issue. Firstly, from the quality and objectivity of research itself, the corporations that carry this out may be tempted to manipulate results in order to maximize benefits. In the other words, there are numerous scandals as a result of new products being introduced hurriedly after inadequate trials. For instance, Thalidomide, a german drug that results in the birth of many malformed children. From the ethical perspective, taking scientific investigation like Genetic engineering in the hands of private sector may have social consequences that may result in the entire whole ecosystem demolish. Such as, GM crops which have unproven damages on environments as a result of middling nature.
Another reason that scientific research should be observed and provided money by government is that although governments should allocate resources in various public spending, it should be responsible for scientific research. first of all, the highest standards can be set by providing money for university departments to have high-quality research which benefits society, not to break into new markets, or making a competitive edge. Furthermore, knowledge thus gained can be shared worldwide throughout the academic community.
Furthermore, government-decision making is the best way to prioritize expenditure on specific areas of the probe, taking into consideration the needs of society, both present, and future. One example is the development of renewable energy to meet growing demands.
In conclusion, while some people believe that scientific research should be fund and observe by corporation, I agree that the government should bear sole responsibility for scientific research.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68404907975 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15902074966 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579754601227 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.002498895 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.357142857 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369324644132 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121646381784 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117125286529 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216617660145 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11615058702 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.