News plays an important part of most people's lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?
Following the news has become a daily routine for majority of people. There are different reasons contributing to this fascination such as to increase social awareness. Although it is vital to be informed, hearing bad news has detrimental effect in our mind. Therefore, the question is why there are so many of bad news. do bad events outweigh good ones in people real life?
Individuals follow the news for several reasons. First of all, a responsible citizen always wants to be aware of what is happening in his/her society to act accordingly. For example, when people hear about the government decision to start a war, they organize some campaign to prevent it. Without knowing about the decision, they would not be able to show their protest on time. Secondly, talking about what is going on in the society is a good starting point for social conversation since everyone can participate in the argument.
Nevertheless, majority of the news is dedicated to disasters, death, violence and war. People are bombarded with this unfortunate information which somehow get used to hearing them and have lost their significance long time ago. There is always war in places around the world or a hate attack against some groups, e.g., Muslims, Christen. On the other hand, there are rarely happy reports, like preserving an endangered species from distinction on the news, that it always attracts lots of attention whenever such news gets to the front line.
In an industrial life, people are surrounded with stress and need to be cheered up. The truth is lots of good things happen in this world otherwise people had given up on life long time ago. There is always hope and that is what keeps people going on. Broadcasting cheerful news helps people to realize that there are still others who are doing good jobs to help the environment or other humans.
In conclusion, although bad news help raise awareness, it can be beneficial to show more good news to increase hope and happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, e.g., first, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, talking about, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98208955224 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64504563837 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585074626866 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4796237045 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8421052632 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6315789474 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42105263158 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33959791907 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107473980473 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103867456147 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206296556732 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876397783542 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.