Without CAPITAL PUNISHMENT (the death penalty) our LIVES ARE LESS SECURE and CRIMES of
violence INCREASE. Capital punishment is ESSENTIAL to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Owing to the surge in the rate of criminal activities, enactment of death penalties have become quintessential. The presence of this law provides security to citizens and reduces crimes, I completely support this notion as this not only generates fear among criminals but also abolishes the roots of crime from society.
To begin with, there are a plethora of reasons to support my view that capital punishment is necessary for punishing brutal offenders. Firstly, this strict penalty generates extreme fear which threatens the un-ethical people to commit delinquencies. This is because the thought of death and harsh imprisonment life filled them with dread, thereby distancing them from the serious offences of murder and rape. For instance, after the announcement of death penalties for the accusers in the Nirbhaya's murder case in India, a 40% decline in the rate of rape incidents has been observed. Alternatively, if there is no such rule, then criminals will not hesitate to commit crime even in public, thus, producing terror in the lives of the general public.
Secondly, my opinion is further bolstered by the factor that with the help of this stringent rule the origin from where crime generates gets abolished. The reason for this is the major criminal activities such as terrorist attacks, gang rapes and murders usually involves a chain of criminals who accomplish these delinquencies in criminal-groups. For example, with the death penalty of Kasab an accuser for the Mumbai attacks, the major terror group Jaish got destroyed. Therefore, destroying the main heads of these chains will automatically hinder others from committing the crime, consequently, reducing the number of the crime rate.
In conclusion, it can be stated that for providing security and non-violent environment to the citizens, the law of capital punishment is extremely important. I perceive, it threatens the criminals and destroys the origins of crimes leading to the reduction in offences and spread of prosperity.
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...n in offences and spread of prosperity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37539432177 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94578787631 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586750788644 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1136745771 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 131.076923077 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8461538462 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199726408452 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711089814621 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454160284244 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124994861384 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243911451682 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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