You recently traveled on the local bus service in your town. You think the driver drove badly and was rude to the passengers. Write a letter to the manager of the local bus service. In your letter
introduce yourself and say when the incident happened
describe what you saw and heard
say what you would like the bus company to do about it
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to share my concern from a recent experience on the local bus.
I am a resident of Brampton and I use your local bus service every day for my office commute. For my onward journey, I take bus number 9A at 8:51 AM from Wanless & Mississauga Rd. to downtown Toronto. And I take bus 9B for the return at 5:45 PM.
Earlier this week, on Tuesday, I had some early work at the office and I decided to take the earlier 9A bus at 8:05 AM from my regular stop. However, that turned out to be one of the worst mornings for me and also for the other passengers. The driver drove the bus very badly, he was speeding, cutting lanes, and even jumping signals. The passengers were really scared. When one of the passengers requested to slow down, the drive started using abusive language.
I am not sure if this is his daily behavior or something was wrong that day. However, I believe such rude behavior with the passengers is not acceptable. The bus drivers are expected to be polite and courteous. Also, bad driving concerns the safety of travelers.
I would request you to take necessary action against this driver and help ensure that this behavior is not repeated. Looking forward to the resolution of this complaint, please.
Yours faithfully,
Umang.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63362068966 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49140059807 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612068965517 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1505918884 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1875 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1875 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.49484536082 602% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226988540045 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695487681714 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574111892451 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122164912552 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565508331748 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.