You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there Write a letter to the taxi manager and say Describe what you left and where it happened Why are these papers important What would you like the manager to do about it

Essay topics:

You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say:
– Describe what you left and where it happened.
– Why are these papers important?
– What would you like the manager to do about it?

Hello Mr. Shingh,

Let me shoot a quick introduction of myself. I, Sharmistha Naskar, took a ride yesterday around 5.15PM, I got into your taxi from IT park Saltlake and get down near Partstreet location. I am sharing my booking details with you below:
Transaction ID: XD5456765
Name: Sharmistha Naskar
Date: 11th Feb, 2020
Driver Name: Susant Basu

By mistakenly, I left a blue transparent channel file containing crucial official documents in your car. While I took ride I kept that file back of the seat. I was in hurry for meeting with USA clients. So, when I get down from your car, I forgot to carry it with me. It was really an important meeting for me but I had to reschedule the same as I was not having that file with papers.

However, I would like to request you to bring back that file with papers so that I can complete my meeting tomorrow. Today I will be visiting your office location, please let me know your convenient time to meet.

Thank you in advance.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...crucial official documents in your car. While I took ride I kept that file back of th...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, really, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61016949153 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52460836949 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677966101695 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4829898477 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105688042131 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432661795494 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541746897879 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0434664913298 0.12726935374 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512628165201 0.0580467560999 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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