Dear sir,
I am Jay Thanki. I visited your G&T Computer store located near international cricket play ground in Gujarat.At the store the person who assisted me he told me that they will fix the speaker problem which was in my Dell Laptop. But after visit I faced many other issue with my laptop.
As, firstly I feel very shame that I had maintain very old relation with you but still I did not get very poor service and rediculas reply from your store. I went to your shop because last month I purchased a Dell laptop from your outlet but after six months the speakers of laptop sudenly stop working so I went to that outlet and the reseptionist told me they will fix the problem and give me my laptop back after a week. Last monday I received my laptop back but actually the speaker problem is not solved but they also damaged the main screen of my laptop. Moreover when I call them they replied me very rudely that they did not give me surety about the repair and during repairing the screen was damage and it was not them fault.
As I am requesting you that it is your responsibility to repair my laptop as it is in warranty period. So please give my proper service for my laptop and fix my speaker problem and as well as screen problem which is because of your store staff.
Thank You,
Jay Thanki
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: At
...national cricket play ground in Gujarat.At the store the person who assisted me he...
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Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'maintained'.
Suggestion: maintained
...s, firstly I feel very shame that I had maintain very old relation with you but still I ...
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Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'maintained'.
Suggestion: maintained
...s, firstly I feel very shame that I had maintain very old relation with you but still I ...
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Line 5, column 562, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...o damaged the main screen of my laptop. Moreover when I call them they replied me very r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, moreover, so, still, well, i feel, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36734693878 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21575141935 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50612244898 0.622605031667 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.7776035989 44.8134815571 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 4.34317383033 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221872483006 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942910887614 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593235178193 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170771782554 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221936528124 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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