You rented a car recently, but were not satisfied with it.
Write a letter of complaint to the rental agency. In your letter
• Introduce yourself
• Explain what went wrong with the car you rented
• Ask for some form of compensation.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my satisfaction with a car that I rented two weeks ago. I rented a Ford sedan, plates no. ZOZ-694, for one week, starting from the 3rd to the 10th of April 2018.
I was supposed to receive a car with great mechanical condition. Unfortunately, that never happened. Firstly, the air conditioning system didn’t work as desired. Although the weather was so hot, I chose to open the windows rather than switching it on. As the results were both the same. Secondly there were two holes in the rear left tire, that didn’t keep the air from escaping. As a result, I went to the tire repair shop and paid 30 dollars. Finally, I regret to inform you that your service was below my expectations.
I believe this matter deserves your urgent attention, hoping you can settle it by refunding at least 50% of the rental charges that I had paid to your agency.
Looking forward to hearing from you
Yours faithfully
John.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, at least, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79881656805 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68378258834 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686390532544 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4073554365 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.3846153846 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208397978944 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585892957759 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492702501982 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11005825095 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263460601492 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.67 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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