You ride a bicycle to work, but there is a problem with the parking. Write a letter to the manager of the Parking Management Company.
In your letter, you should tell:
why you ride a bicycle to work
what the problem is with the parking
what your suggest are.
Dear Sir,
My name is Valli, and I am writing to bring my concern regarding the parking space in Park street.
To elaborate further, I usually use a bicycle to commute to work to keep myself fit and active. Moreover, it is highly conducive to burn unwanted calories, by free of cost, since the cost of petrol is saved using this mode of transport.
However, I face a predicament while parking my bicycle, since the place is completely occupied by cars or other four-wheelers. Initially, during morning hours there would be plenty of space available for parking, but nowadays, even before 8 AM it is completely packed by other vehicles.
Certainly, there are no warning signs in the place of bicycle parking, which should be placed in order to prevent these issues. Additionally, a tow-away or some minimal amount of fine as to be devised on offenders, this could make them follow the rules. Finally, I hope you would understand my issue, and I am looking forward to seeing changes in the upcoming days.
Thank you for being considerate.
Yours faithfully,
Valli
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, look, moreover, regarding, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01648351648 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7445041195 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686813186813 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7062345459 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119100127429 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493051661982 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362476297233 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612140946383 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289484717715 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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