Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter in regard of a poster which was implanted over a building near to thomsons park in pink city. The advertisement was showing that there is a requirement of volunteers for the event which is going to be organised on Jun 17th 2019. I want to participate in the event as a solo dancer.
I have an urge to participate in this event as, I have participated in many national dance competitions on behalf of my school and college. Moreover, all the money earned in this charity fund will be used for constructing school in a backward village, it is also a reason which pushes me to participate in this event.
I will be very helpful in the way that, firstly my dance performance will last for 20 - 25 minutes, which will increase total duration of this event. Last but not the least, I am capable to present a religious performance which may be used in the starting of the event.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Jacob Romans
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, look, may, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61235955056 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79116119533 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601123595506 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0281936111 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2222222222 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152410631803 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648161119675 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408746056689 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981079032123 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181770054551 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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