You saw a person that you knew in a newspaper which you have no contact for a very long time. Write to the editor and in your letter include:
Tell how you knew that person
What do you want to tell that person
Tell how the editor can help you contact that person
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing about your newspaper that was published last month.
In the Fashion & Style column of your newspaper on 16th April, one of your writers featured an international designer, Kimberly Swan. Kimberly was my childhood friend and we lived in the same neighborhood.
Her parents decided to migrate to Britain, and since then, we have never communicated. I have been looking for ways to contact Kimberly to inform her about the recent passing of her grandmother. She was her favorite granddaughter because they have the same interest in dresses, and I am sure that Kimberly will be devastated when he hears about this unfortunate event.
I would appreciate it if you can provide any information about Kimberly. If your schedule permits, we can arrange a meeting to talk about this. You can phone me at 714-485-1258.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best Regards,
Joyce Smith
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10191082803 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80953494741 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694267515924 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9724670426 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.75 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0833333333 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199322876083 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778388620674 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703821153606 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127779090276 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072887122513 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.41 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.