You should spend 20 minutes on this task.
During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
Remind him when and where you met
Tell him what kind of job you are interested in
Say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows :
Dear …….. ,
Dear Sir
I am writing this letter with regards to the conversation we had last week on the flight. My name is Niharika, I hope you will recognize me.
We boarded 6ABC76 plane on 27 October last Wednesday, which was from Bangalore to Delhi. I was sitting next to your seat. I remember you discussed about how you started a restaurant and how it became a popular chain of restaurants in city. We had a long conversation about this and during it I informed you I am looking for a job opportunity.
In your knowledge there was some openings in one of your restaurants. I would like to share that I have 6 years of experience in management and human resource, which makes me suitable candidate for managerial roles. I am flexible with shifts as well as I have worked in a Hotel in Delhi for 3 years and in a Club for 3 more.
I believe, my experience can support me in all kind of managerial roles you have currently available at your restaurant. As I have worked mostly in North region, I would be eagerly interested in exploring work culture of Bangalore as well. As I have no family constraints, I am willing to relocate as well.
I would be expecting a positive response from you on this. I would like to hold this opportunity to work with such a hard working person.
Thanks and Regards
Niharika
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ear Sir I am writing this letter with regards to the conversation we had last ...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er you discussed about how you started a restaurant and how it became a popular c...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r 3 years and in a Club for 3 more. I believe, my experience can support me i...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51046025105 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80871278201 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564853556485 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4601587298 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8666666667 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18058561004 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609422523693 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795514380024 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104024983421 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889027664741 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.