You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
While reading the courses and programs offered in this university, one course in specific caught my attention: Python Programming. My name is Sara Haddad and I am writing you this letter as I am strongly interested in enrolling in the course.
I was always intrigued by the data management science which led me to where I am now: job hunting for data analyst jobs. However, one of the skills required is the ability to use data analytics tools. Python is one of popular tools used in that field. I have read on the brochure that Python requires a prerequisite: the completion of an elementary course. Unfortunately, I have not completed one. I have completed an introductory course on Microsoft SQL. In cases such as mine where I do not meet the prerequisite requirements, can an exception be made? Perhaps an exam I could take to qualify me.
I would be grateful if you guide me to the best solution given my circumstances. I am really looking forward to enroll in Python Programming and gain a competitive edge in my job search.
Yours faithfully,
GP
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, While reading the courses and programs o...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to enrolling'.
Suggestion: to enrolling
...cumstances. I am really looking forward to enroll in Python Programming and gain a compet...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8064516129 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01531911768 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639784946237 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8788265912 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7692307692 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3076923077 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171858315614 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600351167138 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641868903904 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107270235052 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251902301984 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.