Write about the following topic Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor What are some of the reasons for world poverty How can the poor be helped Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant ex

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Write about the following topic:

Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor.

What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?

Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

In the entire world, many people can be seen without a proper wealth either in developed or non-developed countries, this becomes a common worrying factor today. In such circumstances, governments in each countries are taking various measures to manage the situation. So, the upcoming discussion will take you through the number of reasons behind poverty and the plans to support the needy residents.

Countries, cities and states are overwhelmed by poorer people because of larger population growth then the estimated by the local population control bodies. Due to the increasing people, government is unable to provide a required education for each individuals. In addition, unemployment between people has shown significant raise and eventually creates a sludge in country's economic improvement. This being the major cause behind the un-wealthy situation in many countries.

The notion behind each country is to support thier people from being poor and change the perspective of their administrative capabilities and the rejuvenate the economy. There are myriad ways to achieve current situation is by developing a welfare program with key initiatives and solutions. Simultaneously, a free education system to be brought in to policies that can be availed by people under certain poverty level.

It will be a tougher task than any-other to bring the people from bottom level to higher level in the society with recognition inside and outside the country. In fact, many of us must have seen that there are still countries without the poor peoples and their economy is also at par.

To conclude, the raise in poor wealth are mainly due the unavailability of adequate plan and reservations that does not exist in many places and they are facing slowdown and causing internal wars to live.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, then, in addition, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31929824561 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91232297581 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60350877193 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8128774492 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.615384615 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211209533885 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065207529539 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348973996823 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106389540853 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431950981411 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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