You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir / Madam,
As I was doing a recent research about taking a new skill development course from multiple sources and I came across your course pamphlet in one of the publications with an offer during enrollment. Because of which, I'm writing to request you to provide me a feasible exception to avail this course that would be a great support for my future career.
My misfortune, I have been told to quit my job by my employer due to the lack ability in self development as the is the core skill required for corporate organizations, this often occurred to me instead of mentoring me to excel in that skills. So I decided to take up the new skill development course, However, I do not claim to have basic criteria of elementary course to avail and to be part of this course.
Therefore, I place my humble request to you to review and provide me an exception to get the benefit of this course which could enable me to elevate my skills and ability to next level and I were able to sustain in the market as well to run my family smoothly.
Yours faithfully,
Ganesh Prakasam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
Suggestion: recent research
Dear Sir / Madam, As I was doing a recent research about taking a new skill development co...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...er during enrollment. Because of which, Im writing to request you to provide me a ...
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Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mily smoothly. Yours faithfully, Ganesh Prakasam
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56345177665 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6516690672 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604060913706 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 16.3608247423 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.5229271209 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.833333333 76.5299724578 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8333333333 16.8248392259 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137075316607 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627980259615 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350107449142 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937217136758 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185819590451 0.0580467560999 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 8.37731958763 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 7.45979381443 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 8.54432989691 173% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.