You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference Write a letter to a former teacher In your letter give details of the job explain why it is important to you suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

Essay topics:

You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.

Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter:

give details of the job
explain why it is important to you
suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

Dear Mr. Jackson,

I am Smith Silva, your beloved computer science student at Christian college. I am writing to request you to provide a reference letter for my new job.

After my graduation, i have been trying hard to get a dream job in Google as a software developer at New York which involves analysis of human behavior based on their search criteria.

This carrier is most important milestone in my life since it gives me international work experience, monitory benefits along with dedicated accommodation and kids schooling till they reach 18 years. In addition, to this every year my role in the company will be changed based on my performance to the organization.

To apply for this job, i need to produce a reference letter along with my application, so my sincere request to you is to provide me a reference letter stating my skills, attitude and behavior as this will provide positive view to the recruiter.

I would be grateful to you to receive your reference letter at the earliest.

Yours sincerely,
Smith Silva

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 24, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rganization. To apply for this job, i need to produce a reference letter alon...
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Line 9, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...provide positive view to the recruiter. I would be grateful to you to receive yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98295454545 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85247079175 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.1075927449 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.625 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268745778489 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131338599345 0.0766984524023 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125511411429 0.0603063233224 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166969721019 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114866783868 0.0580467560999 198% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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