Some people think that educated people are more valuable than people who have learned skills through experience.
Do you think that educated people are the most valuable for society?
What kinds of skills can people learn through experience that can benefit society?
In our society, educated people are well recognized and treated with gestures when compared to people who developed their skills from their experience. This is often a debatable topic of discussion with public today. A few believes that educated people are the most precious to our society while others not. This essay will discuss, about what i personally think about educated people? and what skill that one can develop from his experience to benefit society?.
Academic studies are nowadays include the subjects related to architecture, mechanical and electrical engineering, which requires more involvement in theoretical studies as well as practical hands-on experience to understand more deeper about the subject and the topics. on account of this, people treat them well because of their knowledge they gained through their studies and also they believe that, such students will go across the border to establish his skills and also become the pride to his society.
Even in such places, we can see people gained his knowledge from base while they are working. Such skills can help them to provide services to the local community and it won't add value to his future development, because of the lack of education it puts them in a inept situation and inability to communicate and articulate the about the work. This brings an adverse effect on their ability to concur.
In our country, agricultural and farming are the best suitable skill that can help themselves as well the society surrounded by them in a remarkable way, since today we cannot eat food without farmers being put their hand and feet in farm land. Such skilled work is more promising to others. To conclude, educated people are treated well and experience people are not recognized by all.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11724137931 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59084641319 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565517241379 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.8089279736 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.153846154 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331191925167 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130055521053 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992771186501 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207162406231 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103717985554 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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