You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.
Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter:
give details of the job
explain why it is important to you
suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference
Dear Mr Kapur,
I am Sunil Thanda, who was your student in the BA Economics class of 2018. I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to seek a letter of reference from you to support my application for the job of a trainee journalist in The Hindu group of publications.
This is a fabulous position that entails covering local events in this city along with assisting a senior journalist in collating content for major stories. Given my flair and passion for media work and the brand equity of The Hindu in this field, I am eager to get this job. Furthermore, I am anxious to start earning soon so as to support my family, as my father has recently retired.
It will be great if you can vouch for my character and perseverance in the reference letter. More importantly, your reference towards my attitude and aptitude to learn will have a salutary effect on my application. Considering that you used to praise me a lot while I was your student, I trust that you will be happy to recommend me for this position.
I look forward to receiving your reference letter. Thanks in advance.
Yours Sincerely,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ass of 2018. I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to seek a letter...
^
Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ore, I am anxious to start earning soon so as to support my family, as my father has rec...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, well, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.625 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72568798655 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0005555525 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0909090909 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273788387894 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110712751188 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10013145425 0.0603063233224 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190718196025 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924486026493 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.