You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houselflat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain
the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ................. ,
Dear Mike,
I have just received your letter in which you complain about the noise from my house. I am really sorry about that.
I would like to explain the reason for these sounds that disturbed you. A few days ago I took possession of the funny puppy. I called him Jack. He is an adorable pet, nevertheless noisy and crazy. First day in my house was the most difficult not only for the dog, but also for me. I suppose for you too, because it was the noisiest day. Jack was whining and barking all day long. At the end of the day he gnawed the sofa and few pairs of shoes. Moreover, I couldn't even expect that my fur puppy could make a lot of puddles on the floor.
Yesterday I invited a dog breeder for Jack. He helped me to understand how to train a dog properly. He said that dogs like having routine and I have to create a right schedule for all puppy's needs. So, we will work it out.
I promise you won't be disturbed with the noise from my flat anymore. I hope you will accept my apologies.
Sorry to have caused these problems.
Kate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ouse. I am really sorry about that. I would like to explain the reason for th...
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Line 5, column 458, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ofa and few pairs of shoes. Moreover, I couldnt even expect that my fur puppy could mak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24752475248 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16937900653 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648514851485 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9330986267 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 47.6666666667 76.5299724578 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.2222222222 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72222222222 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211801123454 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582079569893 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086127348394 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130346114368 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119535199962 0.0580467560999 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.2 8.37731958763 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.19 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.