You stayed at a friend’s house last weekend and lost your watch. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should:
– Thank him/her for the good time you had.
– Describe your watch.
– Tell your friend what you would like him/her to do with it if he/she finds it.
Hi Cameroon,
How have been this week buddy? Hope you had a pleasant and enjoyable week at work. Mine was quite busy but thankfully I was able to pull off the presentation well that I mentioned about when we met the last week. Anyway, first let me thank you for the wonderful party over the weekend and appreciate you for being such a great host. My wife was truly delighted by your hospitality and my kids loved the gifts.
You know what? Thanks to my bad memory, I forgot my Swizz watch at the window of your drawing-room. Anna presented it to me on our 1st anniversary. It had platinum plated dial with heavy metal straps. Blue in colour, it’s easy to identify as it has my name printed at the back.
I would like you to do me a favour in case you find it. Please ship it to my office address before Anna gets to know about this. Be my saviour as always.
Loads of Love,
John Gresham
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 147, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ts to know about this. Be my saviour as always. Loads of Love, John Gresham
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, if, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3483484589 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.711764705882 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0657010476 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.4285714286 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1428571429 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241913695867 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752571337022 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786943761322 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162589563162 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266255421806 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.35 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.