You stayed at a hotel recently and forgot your clothes there. Write a letter to the hotel manager and say
– When and where did you stay?
– Describe your clothes.
– What would you like the manager to do about it
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Ahmed Karem,and I am one of your frequent clients. I am writing to you to inform you that I forget items during my stay in your hotel.
Firstly, I would like to express my satisfaction with my staying in your hotel. I was a guest at your hotel at floor Number 11, Apartment no 222; My booking was from 22 July till 30 July. Unfortunately, after I reached my home,I founded that I forget a piece of cloths which is really important to me; it is a gift from my lovely wife.
let me add this, it is a black leather jacket which can wear only on a formal occasion. Moreover, It has two brown lines on its back.
I would like to recommend that if you can send it to me, I will appreciate this; I suggest that you can send it by DHL , and I will pay any cost.
I look forward to hearing from you; your prompt response is highly appreciated. Should you require any further information, you can contact me; here is the contact number: 555667788. Thanks in advance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am Ahmed Karem,and I am one of your fr...
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Line 2, column 17, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am Ahmed Karem,and I am one of your frequent clients. I am...
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Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing in your hotel. I was a guest at your hotel at floor Number 11, Apartment no 2...
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Line 4, column 228, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
.... Unfortunately, after I reached my home,I founded that I forget a piece of cloth...
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Line 4, column 252, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... reached my home,I founded that I forget a piece of cloths which is really import...
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Line 4, column 339, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o me; it is a gift from my lovely wife. let me add this, it is a black leather j...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
... it is a gift from my lovely wife. let me add this, it is a black leather jack...
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Line 8, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s; I suggest that you can send it by DHL , and I will pay any cost. I look ...
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Line 8, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd it by DHL , and I will pay any cost. I look forward to hearing from you; your...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, moreover, really
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27659574468 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49787009295 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632978723404 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4042954508 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0909090909 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294950987692 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103408042665 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104109896763 0.0603063233224 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14490356778 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841927570775 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.