You stayed at a hotel recently and forgot your clothes there. Write a letter to the hotel manager and say– When and where did you stay?– Describe your clothes.– What would you like the manager to do about it?

Essay topics:

You stayed at a hotel recently and forgot your clothes there. Write a letter to the hotel manager and say

– When and where did you stay?

– Describe your clothes.

– What would you like the manager to do about it?

Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing to report the loss of a personal valuable item in your hotel “The Taj” on my recent visit.

Let me elaborate, On Friday, 10th January, I was on two days business trip to Chandigarh. I booked your hotel for the stay because I was quite impressed with customers' review and room number E-250 on the 5th floor was allotted to me. If I recall correctly, I forgot the luggage bag near the reception desk while I was checking out.

It is a red color travel bag. There are my brand new suit and brand name ‘Raymond’ is embossed on the front side, two-pack of t-shirts, two blue jeans and important official documents. I bought the suit for my brother’s wedding and the documents are required for the upcoming business meeting. I, therefore, request you to forward these details to the person-in-charge.

Could you please let me know if a suitcase fitting with the aforementioned description has been found? In case, if it is found, please feel free to contact me on mobile number +91-98037#### and keep it in a safe place. I will arrange to collect it at the earliest convenience.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Deepak Sharma

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0145631068 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08645373269 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660194174757 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3013981332 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4615384615 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158623339341 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562129024898 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613563132568 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989232736957 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628993422701 0.0580467560999 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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