You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.Write to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you were at the restaurant, describe the problems and write about the a

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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Write to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you were at the restaurant, describe the problems and write about the action you want the manager to take.

Dear Sir,
I am a loyal customer of your brand and visit almost every fortnight to your restaurant. I am a big fan of continental cuisine and relish the feast at your place. On the occasion of mother’s day .I along with my family visited restaurant for a family dinner.
We were comfortably placed and ordered our food. However, to our surprise, it took at least 30 minutes for the food to arrive on our table .Your team member Hitesh, was not apologetic about it. Furthermore side items were fine but our taste buds went sour when we took first bite of our main course dish ‘fish corn salsa’. Fish was overcooked and not correctly roasted. We felt marination had some issues because blend of spices were missing.
Your chef was not open to take feedback and was adamant that meal was cooked with high standards. I will suggest you to coach your team to be more courteous in understanding customer demand. It will be highly appreciated if you get the taste monitoring done before it is served to customers
Looking forward to a favourable reply.
Your truly
Ipsa

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74074074074 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65005956738 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698412698413 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3217373765 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6666666667 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232477505931 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746199210213 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388920817008 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102319530096 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654298400385 0.0580467560999 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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